Sunday, 19 February 2017

My Evaluation


Stop Motion Animation Evaluation
                                                            

Leading up to my animation I did a lot of background research to find out about stop motion animation and famous people who did it. The beginning research stated of me and finding out background information about animation in general and what the motion animation was. I looked at people such as Edward Muybridge, George Melies, Jan Svankmajer, and Travis Knight. For part of my research I look into different Youtubers who crated animations for their content. I looked at Swoozie, Jaiden Animations, Domics and CypherDen. To prepare for this animation I crated a story board of what roughly my animation was going to be about, from there I experimented with character design and what my characters would look like. I decide to give my characters a basic look as my animation was aimed at young people. I feel the content of my animation suited the target audience I had set before making. On the other hand, the style of drawing used looked as if it was supposed to be aimed at a younger audience.

It took me a while to figure out what kind of set was going to be used in my animation because I still didn’t have an exact idea of what the theme was. I made my fist set out of cardboard from an old box, then I decorated it with dark blue and red tissue paper. I did face a few issues when making the set as it wasn’t very strong and I kept on having to tape it up. When I reached around 7 or 8 seconds into my stop motion animation my set sadly got ruined to I had to recreate my whole set again as well as the characters I had made. When it came to reaming my set u still used a cardboard box, but I decorated the set differently. The theme of my animation was supposed to be sci fi so I used watercolour to paint the set background. I overcame the problem of the damaged set and charter my making new ones and thinking about what stronger materials to uses so that they wouldn’t get damaged.

One I had showed people my finished animation I got both good and bad feedback which I feel I can use to help me in future projects. One of the good feedbacks was that I had used of music and that it went well with the theme of the animation. However, the bad feedback was that my hand did get in a few frames, so next time I should be careful when shooting. the animation. The other improvement I received from my feedback was the fact that the animation was a bit too fast at times so it was hard to read the speech sometimes.

Personally, I feel my animation came out well in the end because of editing music and effects used in the animation. However, I feel that a weakness for me was that face that the camera moved when it wasn’t supposed to at time which mad the animation look choppy at parts.



After screening my animation the feedback I received was both good and bad, I feel I can sue this constructively to improve future animations. When receiving my feedback I decided to do it on different platforms, for example, a screening where the audience would talk about what they thought of the animation. Another platform I wanted my feedback to be available on was a online questionnaire, where people could anonymously send there opinions of my animation.

Positive Feedback

"the animation was funny"- the end of the animations was funny, the sound effects made this happen

"I liked the different use of sound effects based over the facial expressions"

"the background was good"

Improvements

"the speech bubble went to quick, I wasn't able to read them"

A common response that I have notched in my feedback was the speed of the animation. Due to technology I wasn't able to properly edit my animation so the speech ran smoothly.


Saturday, 18 February 2017

Animation Feedback

Feedback:



After showing my animation to my peers I received both positive and negative feedback which i feel i can reflect and improve on. 

Person 1 said:

  • The music suits the theme of your animation
  • The dark lighting fits the theme of the animation, it looks good

  • You hand appeared in a few frames in the animation, next time be careful what is in the frame


Person 2 said:

  • Good use of sound effects, created suspense
  • Good choice of music created a sci-fi theme

  • The animation itself was a bit fast at times it was hard to read the speech bubbles 

 I plan to take this feedback into account and use it for future animations. I feel the main issue was the speed of my animation and that it was too fast.

My Stop Motion Animation

Animation Dope Sheet



Dope Sheet

Action - Notes
Dialogue
Sound
Frames/Time (Seconds)
Camera Instructions
Walking (C1)

Hard Rain/ Backing music throughout
1 Second
Full Body shot
Still walking (C1)
Great I’m stuck in study limbo
Hard Rain
2 Second

Enters (C2)
You want to know why…
Hard Rain throughout
5

Both turn (C1 C2)
*Screams*
*
7

Walks Backwards (C1)
How did you do that?
*
8

Standing (C2)
Um, I dunno
*
8.5

Characters face camera (C1C2)
You are stuck her…
What do you mean?
*
10

Starts to exit (C2)
No homework no freedom
*
12

Walking away
Have fun or get comfy
*
14-15

Standing (C1)
Why
*
15

Exiting still walking away

*


Teleports towards C1
You are going to die here
*
17
Slightly zoomed in
Standing (C1)
*
*
18-21
Camera zooming in
Standing
(no dialogue)
Suspense strike/Hard Rain
 22-23
Close of on face





Scene